 dsindel
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Date: July 14, 2006 @ 7:13 PM
guitars are nice and dirty sounding, tons of distortion to the point of serious clipping...lol
constructive criticism:
maybe a bit repetitive and I keep feeling like the drums are going to start pounding any moment...  or some other layered guitars will come in to enhance the foundation or keyboards to interest the ears...
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jewsus
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Date: July 17, 2006 @ 12:21 PM
it is pretty repetitive. that was kind of the point, i wanted to keep a central theme throughout it. maybe i should shorten it, so it seems a little more like an intro. any input on this would be appreciated. 
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 Traf
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Date: July 26, 2006 @ 8:32 AM
Interesting sound and bassis for a song. I agree with Dan, would be good to hear some high lead and a few drums come pounding in.
The change at 2.10 is good..
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 evansorchid
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Date: August 14, 2006 @ 11:01 PM
This is not what I expected to hear at all. Actually, this is quite interesting.
I like the recurring riff. It's like a mantra....something to zone out on.
The 'vacuum cleaner' fuzz does get a bit intense in the middle of this, but I like the overall feeling that this seems to convey.
Enjoyed listening...
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BlackMage
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Date: August 15, 2006 @ 11:20 AM
Well, whatever I commented on that last song, this is pretty much the same, expect I can hear the opening riff pretty decently. That is to say, it's not completely out of reach tonally. Could be a lot (and I mean very much) better.
I think I'm hearing some drums very faintly. Either that or the guitar is just seriously starting to clip and is producing some noises of it's own that distantly sound like percussions.
This isn't really good. You need to improve in the tone of your guitar, volume of the drums and a lot of other things. Use much less gain on guitar and if you can't have any decent drums acoustically, then program your own with a sequencer. You're getting nowhere with this kind of stuff.
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